Khanna (2015) on “Explosive growth in Asian cities: Bright ideas to ‘seize the urban moment’ states that multiple South-east Asian cities have been metropolitanized. To adapt to rapid urbanization, South-east Asian governments have exploited technological applications to work with citizens on real time issues.They also use it to ease resource and infrastructural constraints. Furthermore, to increase potential economic growth, the government's focus is on investing in technological infrastructure and the ideal of a green city. The boost in urban productivity establishes their advancement to become the "model of urban development in the 21st century." While the technological applications increase the spread of information and help ease on the infrastructure constraints, it is underutilized and impose little value to the public.
Tuesday, September 22, 2015
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Hi Hong Yi,
ReplyDeleteNice summary! I like your idea of keeping it short and sweet. But then I think your summary can add in more details. For example how this urbanization affect the people in Asia or South-east Asia. Maybe you can add in this sentence in your summary “It is also a challenge for huge cities to provide essential services.” which highlight the problem that the government in Asia or South-east Asia may face because of this urbanization
I see a great use of different verbs and nouns to paraphrase the whole passage as a whole.
Lastly, great summary, I look forward to reading your reader's response!
Hi Hong Yi,
ReplyDeleteThis is a nice summary. It includes several key points of the article. Here are some amendments I recommend:
1. delete extra spacing.
2. With increased population growth
3. many countries have to come up
4. with an innovative
5. this has established
I believe the summary will look better after the amendments. I look forward to reading your future blog post. :D
Hi, I have edited my blog post so please read it again. Thank you
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